Ah, the long-awaited chapter is out, and - my compliments! I like plot surpriprises, especially when they are well-founded, and I really liked the way you handled the "revelation". As for me, I hope the lady would preserve their secret till the time is right, for a change! :) Personally, I thought they would have to reveal themselves as warriors, in order to kill the spider and protect the people... but I like it the other way!
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Date: 2007-11-26 04:17 pm (UTC)Ah, the long-awaited chapter is out, and - my compliments! I like plot surpriprises, especially when they are well-founded, and I really liked the way you handled the "revelation". As for me, I hope the lady would preserve their secret till the time is right, for a change! :) Personally, I thought they would have to reveal themselves as warriors, in order to kill the spider and protect the people... but I like it the other way!
Looking forward to the next chapter, as usual. :)
Rgds
Fran