lindahoyland: (Aragorn and Faramir)
lindahoyland ([personal profile] lindahoyland) wrote2011-07-12 11:25 pm
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The Rivals - Archery

Title: The Rivals
Author: Linda Hoyland
Characters/Pairing: Aragorn, Faramir,Arwen
Rating: G
Warnings: none
Word count: 100
Book/Source: LOTR book-verse
Disclaimer - These characters all belong to the estate of J.R.R. Tolkien. This story was written for pleasure and not for financial gain.

With thanks to NiRi and Cairistiona for advice on archery, a subject about which I know nothing.

The arrows flew thick and fast towards the target. Both men struggled to gain advantage, the arrows of both landing but a fraction from the bull's eye. King and Steward scowled at their bows.

“You should declare a draw,” Arwen suggested when she came to see how the men folk were faring.

“Another few shots should settle it,” said Faramir.

“ I am loth to yield.” Aragorn grimly nocked another arrow.

“Foolish men!” Arwen took up her bow and loosed an arrow. It landed in the centre of the target between those of Aragorn and Faramir. The contest was decided.
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[personal profile] shirebound 2011-07-12 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL, someone wants her husband back! Now the picnic baskets can be opened. :)

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-12 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm pleased this made you smile. A picnic sounds a good idea!

[identity profile] alphien.livejournal.com 2011-07-12 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Perfect! Silly men, let the Queen show you how it's done. Lol, really liked this one.

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 02:19 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this. I've found men very competitive even at scrabble!

[identity profile] alphien.livejournal.com 2011-07-14 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, definitely. Scrabble's a dangerous game!
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[personal profile] dreamflower 2011-07-12 11:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I really like this version! LOL! Enough of the macho stuff, let the Queen settle it! *grin*

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much.I've found men are very competive even at scrabble, they hate to lose!

[identity profile] nierielraina.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
.I've found men are very competive even at scrabble, they hate to lose!

And the women are even worse... =D

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 02:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] cairistiona7.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
This turned out very nicely! Leave it to Arwen to hurry the men along by ending the contest herself!

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 02:21 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you and for your help.I fear they might still b shooting arrows if Arwen hadn't arrived on the scene!

[identity profile] juliaaurelia.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 12:56 am (UTC)(link)
Go Arwen! Of course, she has had centuries more practice than the boys have :)

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 02:22 am (UTC)(link)
Good for Arwen! she was practising before their great grandads were born!

[identity profile] nierielraina.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 04:05 am (UTC)(link)
OH, I like this much better! Nicely done! :)

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 06:47 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you and for all your help. I'm pleased you like it. I was really stuck before.

[identity profile] mrowe.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Good way to end the contest. Yay for Arwen *g*

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 06:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I guess they would be there still had Arwen not turned up!

[identity profile] ellynn-ithilwen.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 08:49 am (UTC)(link)
Yay, girl wins! :))) I wonder what the people of the Gondor councils would say if they saw this. *giggles*

[identity profile] estelcontar1.livejournal.com 2011-07-13 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
A most delightful drabble. It brought a smile to my face. Well done Arwen.

[identity profile] rs9.livejournal.com 2011-07-16 01:12 am (UTC)(link)
Love this!! Foolish men, indeed!

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-22 07:48 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you,men being competitive can be foolish, can't they?

[identity profile] wtiger5.livejournal.com 2011-07-17 08:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome. Girl Power. Love it.

[identity profile] lindahoyland.livejournal.com 2011-07-22 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this.